Which speaks in a voice, so sore?
Did you know what it is to die?
You feel unconscious and have to lie.
You doze off and awake in,
A room full of surprising din!
You search for these dins excitedly,
You find a door, surprisingly!
You enter into the room,
And notice that it is full of gloom!
Then you sight one door,
Which speaks in a voice, so sore?
It says,”Oh, come inside me,
I`ll give you a magnificent tea!”
You are pulled in, by an invisible force,
Then you move in a course!
And then you have to say bye-bye,
To your loved ones and immediately die!
Excellent writing ! But why the little angel is thinking of ‘To Die’
The first line of the poem just came to my mind and I wrote it down and then the subsequent lines fell in place.(it is just from my imagination, don`t take it seriously)
Very good, I can surely see a potential poet….keep it up!!!
Great little angel……………!
Important to note that apart from a talented poet she is a student and understands the value of time management as well….::))
Keep it up….!